Monday, December 3, 2007

Deadline #15 HW #2 Peer Review Reflection

I peer reviewed Jared Zucker and Michael Wipple's WP #4. After revising their WP #4s, I learned that everyone has learned the same thing from the class. Most of the deadline homeworks used in the letter were the same that I used. It just shows everyone was on the same page in the class. In addition from revising their letters, I need to go over sentence structure. Some of my classmate's sentences were choppy or too long, and so were mine. I need to go back and make sure my sentences flow good and everything makes sense. Stephann revised my WP #4. I was not surprised about her comments. She showed me what I need to work on and what she like about my paper. After her comments, I still need to work on sentence structure and make sure my punctuation is correct. Overall, everyone seems to have done a good job on their WP #4s, including me.

Deadline #15 HW #1 Peer Review WP #4 x2

I peer reviewed Michael Wipple and Jared Zucker's WP #4.

http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=dggxdvt2_15c57jz4&hl=en

http://docs.google.com/Doc?docid=df6m3dtv_9ctxc4p&hl=en