Deadline #5 HW #3 Peer Review Reflection

The two drafts i reviewed this week was Paulette's and Michael's. I what learned from the peer reviews is that everyone makes mistakes. I felt that my draft had to be perfect, but i did not notice it is a draft, not a final paper. With the draft, there is room for improvement. I also learned that the research proposal drafts need the organization and content to fulfill its requirements. For example, for the reviews I conducted, I found missing parts, such as the purpose of the topic and time line for the project. These are key parts needed in the paper. After reviewing my classmate's draft, I need to revise my grammatical errors and content of my draft, to make sure I have all requirements. The classmates that reviewed my draft were Michael and Brennan. The only comment that surprised me was Brennan's comment about writing in first person. I thought it was applicable for the proposal and not the actual research paper. After looking at my classmates' comments, I need to revise some grammar mistakes and add a little more content to suffice my audience.